Saturday, December 19, 2009

I need advice, can you help me?

I am writing a story.


I need to make it more interesting.


Can you give me an idea or something that you would read about?


I want it to be a love story though and I can't come up with a unquie but interesting problem.


I want there to be fantasy too but is too common, what can I do to make it more unique?


Help!I need advice, can you help me?
let it be about a boy who is leaving to a all boy school and hes leaving his gf but the Note before he leave they meet up at a park and he give her a note saying i never than like u and the girl cry for days until her bestFriendd says o he told me to tell u to look n yr pocket jacket n there is another note saying the previous note was for the dad if he found it cuz the daddon'tt like her dating , the note n da pocket says he loved her wit al his heart noe the girl is happy until she watches the newssayingn the plane that her bf was onJustt crashed n everyone died on it . now the girl is sad n kill herself 4 days later the boy calls and says he missed his flight and hisparentss not making him go no more . nowthat'ss something i would read good luck hon !!I need advice, can you help me?
make it about a girl who doesn't get along with anyone at school. and she falls in love with a popular boy who's has all the girls all over him. that would make an exultant story to me and a ton of friends i have!!!!!!!
pleaseyou help me

No comments:

Post a Comment