Sunday, December 27, 2009

Can you help give me some advice on my lyrics(and yes they suck)?

ooh you hit me like a truck stop.im feeling the pressure build on top.


take me away papi chulo,for you are my lover.i cant live without you like on a cold winter day without a warm cover........My lyrics suck can you give me some advice i would really apreciate it that would be nice.Can you help give me some advice on my lyrics(and yes they suck)?
Good lyrics.Can you help give me some advice on my lyrics(and yes they suck)?
It sounds like you through these together without much thought. Look at other bands/artists lyrics and start there!
what genre' of music is itt?

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